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Adrian's avatar

This is an exquisite tale, thank you for the pleasure you gave as I read and reread the passages

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Spanking Theatre's avatar

It's my goal when writing to create passages that are rewarding to reread. I know if I can achieve that, again and again, the story that emerges will be so satisfying.

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Bill Suefert's avatar

Very intense! Good job

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P.M.'s avatar

A GREAT STORY... wow you have been able to excite me too

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Spanking Theatre's avatar

I'm always delighted to know when a story excites more than just the mind!

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