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Ella Light's avatar

I loved this. Extra points for getting 'superposition' into an erotic story. Now for part two, which I really hope is going where I think it is...

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Spanking Theatre's avatar

Well spotted. As this is a story about the intersection of eroticism and technology, I did intentionally sprinkle in some scientific terminology and metaphors!

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Ella Light's avatar

I loved that mix - exactly my nerdy jam : )

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Prince's avatar

What an amazingly well crafted story! Loved the details in the descriptions of the surroundings and the how the setting of the art show has opened up some quite erotic moments!!

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Spanking Theatre's avatar

So glad you enjoyed it! I've always thought there was a latent eroticism in highbrow art shows, it seemed like the perfect setting for this particular tale!

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Prince's avatar

It truly does!! And I am very curious where you go with the technology aspect of this piece

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P.M.'s avatar

GREAT... I imagined everything

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Elle Jamey's avatar

Deliciously twisted and imaginative!

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Simone Francis's avatar

Beautifully written as always and what a cliffhanger at the end

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Spanking Theatre's avatar

Thank you! I promise I won't keep you hanging there for long!

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The Grovenor's avatar

Simply delicious…

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