Thank you for the most interesting, erotic and thought-provoking tale. I didn't want it to end. And it's the first 1984 fanfic I've ever come across. Very much worth the wait.✌🏻😀✌🏻
I hadn't considered it a 1984 fanfic, but that's a cool way to look at it! The novel is better known as a dytopian warning, but I've always seen it as a tragic love story too.
Incredible. I can't wait to read this again with my sub for "storytime" & play our own versions of these games. 1984 is one of my favorites & this has brought it into a whole new light for me. Probably the best piece I've ever read on Substack. 👏
That was magnificent, and I would say more but suffice to say that this should be read my many more people. Many more... I shall post everywhere, if you don't mind. Wow.
Absolutely enticing! The detailed rules of the game were so vivid and suggestive that they left little to the imagination, with explicit instructions for each move, heightening anticipation. I have to admit, it definitely turned me on. The way each person took their turn was so naughty, deliberate, and teasing that it was almost too much to handle.
Then the story is a success! When I was planning this story, I knew that the "interrogation" scenes could be extremely hot if written well. I went over them several times until I'd polished them to my satisfaction. I love the way the reader can almost feel themselves interrogated from the page.
Thank you! This story has been in my drafts folder for literary years, I wanted to make sure I could do the original idea justice. I am very pleased with the final result!
Of for sure! But I was thinking of the converse: in the right mood, with the right story, reading erotica can be highly effective at providing critical, literary insights 🤣
Thank you for the most interesting, erotic and thought-provoking tale. I didn't want it to end. And it's the first 1984 fanfic I've ever come across. Very much worth the wait.✌🏻😀✌🏻
I hadn't considered it a 1984 fanfic, but that's a cool way to look at it! The novel is better known as a dytopian warning, but I've always seen it as a tragic love story too.
Incredible. I can't wait to read this again with my sub for "storytime" & play our own versions of these games. 1984 is one of my favorites & this has brought it into a whole new light for me. Probably the best piece I've ever read on Substack. 👏
Thank you. Storytime is wonderful way to share kinky stories! I hope your own journeys beyond the magic mirror to Oceania are just as enjoyable.
That was magnificent, and I would say more but suffice to say that this should be read my many more people. Many more... I shall post everywhere, if you don't mind. Wow.
I consider it the greatest honour when readers recommend what I've written. Thank you.
By the way, excellent choice of portrait! 😥
Absolutely enticing! The detailed rules of the game were so vivid and suggestive that they left little to the imagination, with explicit instructions for each move, heightening anticipation. I have to admit, it definitely turned me on. The way each person took their turn was so naughty, deliberate, and teasing that it was almost too much to handle.
Then the story is a success! When I was planning this story, I knew that the "interrogation" scenes could be extremely hot if written well. I went over them several times until I'd polished them to my satisfaction. I love the way the reader can almost feel themselves interrogated from the page.
Wow. That was brilliant. Well done
Thank you! This story has been in my drafts folder for literary years, I wanted to make sure I could do the original idea justice. I am very pleased with the final result!
¥ou should be. It's extraordinary. (And a really interesting piece of literary criticism, to boot...)
In the right mood, with the right person, discussing literature can be highly erotic!
Of for sure! But I was thinking of the converse: in the right mood, with the right story, reading erotica can be highly effective at providing critical, literary insights 🤣